[dpdk-dev] [PATCH 22/22] net/hns3: add hns3 build files

Wei Hu (Xavier) xavier.huwei at huawei.com
Sat Aug 31 10:46:12 CEST 2019



On 2019/8/30 14:16, Stephen Hemminger wrote:
> On Fri, 23 Aug 2019 21:47:11 +0800
> "Wei Hu (Xavier)" <xavier.huwei at huawei.com> wrote:
>
> Thanks for doing documentation on this driver.
>
>> +The Hisilicon Network Subsystem is a long term evolution IP which is
>> +supposed to be used in Hisilicon ICT SoCs such as Kunpeng 920.
> This sentence needs some editing to remove marketing speak.
> It is not clear what "long term evolution IP" means when read
> by a DPDK user.  Why not just say that "Hisilcon Network Subsystem
> (HNS) is used in System On Chip (SOC) devices such as the Kunpeng 920".
>
> It is standard practice in technical documents to spell out
> the meaning of acronyms on first use; then use the acronym
> there after.
>
Hi, Stephen Hemminger
    Thanks for your comments,
    We will fix it in patch V2.

    Regards
Xavier




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